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  1. #1 Trailer for a new short shot on BMCC. 
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    I DP'd this short and also put together the teaser. Shot on BMCC with Rokinon's. Edited and graded in Davinci 14

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4u1mX2fLKtI&t=1s

    Feedback is greatly appreciated.
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    That P.Pank-intro is beyond terrible. Same with the cheesy yellow "From Writer And Director"-font with the shadows. Then you have the in-between titles that are yet a third font.
    And then you end on "Premiering October 2017" with a Fourth font, in orange.
    I like the actual footage, you clearly know what you're doing. But hand this off to an actual editor. Or at the very least swap out all the titles for plain white text on a black background.
    You're doing your DP-work no favors with this edit which is why I'm not sugarcoating any of this, so I hope you don't take it the wrong way.
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    Tolin,

    No offense taken. I am not nor will I ever be a good editor. Maybe I should have posted my reel....lol. Thanks
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